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Post by Claire 7th July 2010, 5:17 pm

#12: Cat and Mouse-Red Jumpsuit Apparatus (sort of a Kyoki POV, but can insert other favorite couples in here….mainly RAIKYO!)
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“Are we supposed to be happy? Because every action in this world…. it comes with a price.”
He just stared at me. Blankly. Like he was lost with what I said.

He gazed into my eyes. “I would die for you.”
I quickly replied, “That means you have to live for me too.”

“I’m not supposed to be happy. I really don’t deserve it at all. We’ve had many chances, and I’m just not satisfied with myself.”
“Everyone deserves happiness. All that anyone wants comes at a price, you know? We have to work towards the happiness. I would live and die for you; could you do that too?”

He chuckled softly as a breeze went by. “All this chasing around we’ve been doing. It’s like a cat and mouse ploy. Or a hunter tracking prey. Cat and mouse chasing for weeks.”
“How poetical. But we’re just stupid teenagers, the romantic, passionate sort.”

He just smiled. That perfect smile, cutting through the most unsuitable moment. It came at a wrong time, when emotions didn’t call for it, but….it was so beautiful. All I ever wanted…How much would I have to pay for that….perfect smile? For that perfection? Picture perfect. That’s what he was.

I was just clumsy. “I’m just an idiot. That’s all I am, really. A clumsy, hopeless, stupid, idiot.”
“Well you’re going to be if you keep on beating down on your fragile confidence.” He smirked. That stupid irrepressible grin that really didn’t suit him, yet it was a redeeming quality of him. It was a sign of approval, agreement, and slight happiness.

“So, are we done playing chase? Because I think I’m tired of chasing you. I could just capture you right now, and this would all be over with.” The boy’s eyes glinted in the sunlight as it started to fade over the horizon.

“Well, who said you were doing the chasing? And no game is ever fun…” She turned around, and started to walk in a direction. “…unless you work for it. Love has to be earned you know.”

“Well that’s just stupid.” He took a step forward, a feline stalking forward.
“No, you’re just stupid. Stupid for not getting it. Until the last minute.” I took a few steps forward in some random direction. I looked fondly at the red sun, in its most beautiful form, but it was falling asleep, under the blanket of earth.

That’s when it happened: in a flash, he ran forward and wrapped his arms tight around me. He held me close; like he was worried I would get out of his arms somehow. I actually could’ve escaped by melting into a blushing puddle.
“Hey. I got the mouse.” He smiled darkly, as he pressed his head into my forehead.
“No, the mouse got you.” I stated, and thus, the hunt was over.
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LONG POST IS LONG. And I feel stupidly romantic in this mushy gushy stuff.... argh. Embarassed
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Post by Chezberryz456 7th July 2010, 7:35 pm

awh... That was really good. I loved it! 012: Cat and Mouse 950998
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Post by Claire 7th July 2010, 11:54 pm

Thanks!
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Post by swim2live 12th July 2010, 7:34 pm

Wow that was really good! i loved it! i always love the stuff u write Claire!
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Post by Claire 13th July 2010, 11:54 pm

RINA!!! glomps. LAWL, that's not your real name. XD THX!
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Post by swim2live 15th July 2010, 6:43 pm

YAYZ! I WAS MISSED!!!!

EDIT: Rina=FTW!!!
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Post by WolfieStar 15th July 2010, 6:46 pm

I WOULD LIKE TO GET TO KKNOW YOU!~!!!
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Post by Claire 18th July 2010, 4:53 pm

Thanks for all the comments! I really appreciate them! But if they weren't comments on the writing..... *glares at a certain wolf* then shame. XD
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Post by WolfieStar 18th July 2010, 6:07 pm

JAHGCJGFAJHCGDGHDHJA

I THOUGHT I HAD WRITTEN SOMETHING!!!

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Post by swim2live 18th July 2010, 8:25 pm

Haha we still love u, Wolfie
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Post by Claire 18th July 2010, 11:31 pm

*scoffs* perhaps...... jk lol. XD
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Post by ThaliaAnderson 19th July 2010, 12:03 am

..
I forgot to comment!? D:
Or was this one of those things were I gave my comments in the crackbox?


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Post by Claire 19th July 2010, 11:48 pm

Argh! THIS IS CONFUSING....Oh, not everyone commented on this. Oh wells. *sniffs*
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Post by ThaliaAnderson 20th July 2010, 12:11 am

D:
I thought I had!

My favorite part was Kyoki's line there at the end. "The mouse got you." That was so sweet. >w<
All in all, I really loved this. I would write a well-written review with critique, but I'm feel especially lazy and I just feel like showering people with compliments at the moment. =D
*throws out compliments like confetti*


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Post by Claire 20th July 2010, 11:45 pm

Thank you Thalia? *confused* XD
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